In any case, to work in twinning, exchanging projects in progress, it helps to get opinions, comments, it helps not to work for 2 years in the dark and being told at once that the story doesn't work (to work in twinning, you know it now and you can fix it before the exercise becomes discouraging and frustrating). ;o)
Well, working on the text of others, it makes me desperately want to write! ^_^
I will finish the commented review that I've started, but then I think I'll get back to writing as soon as possible, because I am so tired that my project is not moving and blocs at every turn!